Have you
ever been
so sad
That you felt
your heart
disintegrating
piece by piece
Your soul
withered
Your spirit
dissipated
like smoke
in the wind
Nothing makes
sense
Except the taste
of sadness.
Have you
ever been
so sad
That you felt
your heart
disintegrating
piece by piece
Your soul
withered
Your spirit
dissipated
like smoke
in the wind
Nothing makes
sense
Except the taste
of sadness.
Beautiful. 🎀
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Sana,always a pleasure reading your thoughts.
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Oh, yes.
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Thanks
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Yes, I admit I have felt this way. part of my heart still does deep inside where nothing will find it.
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many people go through this situation on daily basis,but we must continue to be steadfast,overcoming every hurdle…
thanks for sharing your experience.
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You are welcome
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I love the comfort of being sad_kurt cobain
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USA writes,thanks for your thoughts
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Sad to say, but yes. I’m fortunate to bring about a much-needed change to that situation. So well written!
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Susi,it feels good reading your thoughts.Thanks
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❤ There is always hope! I wish you well, Onah.
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Hey Onah,
Well written!! We all try to remove sadness from our lives but, as it is said that you will never come to know the importance of happiness until you passed through those bad days. And what to worry about if you are given various therapies to help you out in your bad time: https://bit.ly/2PuUyXT
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So true.I appreciate your thoughts and i feel your connection with the poem.We all need to stay strong and serve as support system to others when the need arises.
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Good poem.
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thanks
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We all taste moments of sadness, but I don’t pitch a tent there. Sometimes it’s to hard to bare. So reflect, then cast my care to Him. God is Bigger than any problem or situation. He lifts the Load and sets me free!
InHisCare 🙏
Yonnieđź’ś
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Reblogged this on I Write Her and commented:
Although written quite some time ago, Onah really captures the current atmosphere well in this piece.
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